I have decided to post on deviant art in its complete and unadulterated glory the 1st five chapters of my sci-fi story midnight rising plus the one shot why oh why (pending approval as i am using someone else's OC). I have it on my tumblr (
[link] but i feel it will have a more wider audience on deviant art.
plus i would be majorly able to get some feedback on it lol... so desperate for some comments and feedback.